User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition: Movie Idol!/@comment-25152711-20200421132747/@comment-3237624-20200508104830

Appeal: 5 out of 5. The theme is spot-on and you kept the idea of the movie by making it resemble something cafe-ish even without being requested, so I really like that. I feel like I really see the main character in this piece.

Coord Cohesiveness: 4 out of 5. As a whole I love how everything comes together, it's very frilly and sweet looking. I especially like how the top and skirt look together and how they have similar trim. But I do see various elements that stick out because they're not on the other pieces- like the music notes of the accessory, the flowers on the top don't go with the ones on the bottom (I've come to realize over time that pairing two different flower patterns together only works sometimes), the leg accessory. However, just because my attention immediately goes to those details doesn't mean the coord is bad.

Color Blend: 4.5 out of 5. There's a lot of various pinks but they come together lovely. Ironically, the belt wouldn't have hurt the piece this time because it would go with the shoes. The issue is the top, which has more... neutral/dark tones in comparison to the much more lighter other pieces.

I really like how you're able to creatively put a spin on these things. It's really fun to read, and again I find myself agreeing with you.

Appeal: 4 out of 5. It slighly skirts the territory of being "too much" for someone trying to blend in at the school (namely the skirt) but it's still clearly school uniform inspired. I wish the top and stockings were darker though.

Coord Cohesiveness: 5 out of 5. I really like how everything looks together, the styling combination is perfect. There's elements that stick out again, but I think they're less-obvious here, which is a good thing. I wasn't immediately focused on them like on the other piece.

Color Blend: 5 out of 5. Everything goes together perfectly. I think I see every color on each piece.